So many things wrong with this...
First off, the text moves WAY to slow, I found myself nearly falling asleep... Second, There were way to many grammar and spelling errors for you to not notice. Third, with they light grey backrounds, the text became near impossible to read. What were you thinking?
Sorry.
I know.
Its going to fix it.
Not bad...
It was sub-par. What really killed it for me was all of the unnecesarry swearing that Megaman and Zero would never say...
Keep the series going, just take out the swearing.
lmao...I seem to get that complaint about the swearing. Well I'll change it during the course of my series. Thanks tho.
So I says to myself, "Paste" I says, "That's no watercress sandwich, that's my wife! Ahahahaha!" *head explodes*
Age 32, Male
Wilmington, DE
Joined on 7/15/07
Charater Battle Story